Awakened - Melanie  Walker I wanted to like this story. I really did. The premise was fantastic! However an overabundance of both grammatical and spelling errors detracted from the story itself. Also, there were gaps in the plot where it seems as though the author's brain was working faster than her fingers and causing her to leave out vital information/scenes, leaving the reader confused and trying to muddle through what they just read because there is no coherent train of thought to follow. I also noticed that a few times in the novel, the author switched from 3rd person to 1st person voice. Big no-no, unless you are writing from the perspective of two characters and one is written in 1st person and the other in 3rd person. With a diligent review team and editor I truly believe this book could become a 4 or 5 star piece.